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Post  Kutanra on Tue Jul 10, 2012 11:58 pm

The problem I see is she only seems to have one major event in her life, which is defining her entire character, the death of her mother and their imprisonment. Most people have multiple things which change different aspects. eg Vane spent two years on the streets (which is still cliche BUT) many things affected him in that time; because food was scarce he is protective of it and sometimes will still hunt his own live prey (such as birds, strays, rodents etc) like he did on the streets.

See its not a big or dramatic thing but its believable and realistic and adds something to his character.

You say she loves the motor bike, what got her into it, the feeling of freedom? she likes the speed? Try to create minor events that change minor but noticable traits

If she has OCD maybe it started when she found some small rocks down at the beach and had to line them up, and has ended up collecting small interesting pebbles

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:46 am

Agreed with Vane. If I've learned anything from character development it is to give a reason for most things, especially major experiences in life.

Like Jess's more motherly nature, I don't know if any of you know about her parents but her father, Dale Icefurie, was injured when she was only just a little girl and it left him paralyzed. Dale of course could still live healthily but it put him in a rut of severe depression and struggle, which kind of rubbed off on her mother Ira. Jess did her hardest to help her mother and father by taking up many of the responsibilities of the household by the time she was able to, and this sort of nature has shone through with Kate, as she was honestly abandoned/orphaned (but it wasn't too major and those memories are repressed, but she was still effected heavily by the separation) and needed someone there to protect her for a while.

Meh it's all a bit confusing so I hope you understand. XD I like Vane's OCD/pebble idea. Do stuff like that. Kate's obviously a very possessive and greedy person, hence her almost dire attachment to chocolate and just food in general. There's a bunch of psychological things involving THAT but it's in part to do with her possessive and somewhat greedy nature.

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Post  Kyugima on Wed Jul 11, 2012 2:54 am

Hmmm... I think the love of her motorcycle comes from the fact she feels free when she finally gets to ride it, She feels like nothing can hold her back when she's on her bike, that all her worries are gone and riding her bike is all that matters XD It was given to her from The Company so she could travel through the city easier. I think I tend to concentrate on those two events because those are the ones i worked on the most, they were different earlier on, and I kept changing them till they reached the point they are currently at, so those two events feel like the things I have put the most effort into.

The OCD is more with cleaning. Constantly cleans her weapons, her bike, her room, things like that. I don't know what would have started it... I actually kind of imagine the father as a bit of a grotty man, so perhaps she simply disliked the mess at first, but it soon became an obsession?
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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:23 am

Vantani, ever heard of Sintel?

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:23 am

Sintel...?

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 3:39 am

Aw man I just searched it up and watched it, thanks for making me cry, Kuta D'X

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:12 am

It ruined my mood a little. =(

Oh yeah I remember that one! Best princess ever, being homies with the dragons. (I'd totally have that job if I could XD)

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:15 am

I can imagine you doing that too XD

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:25 am

I just hope dragons have cough drops or something because my voice would hurt after a while. D:

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:49 am

nah it'd be fiiiiine XD

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 4:54 am

How would you know? ARE YOU A DRAGON?!

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:22 am

Yes.

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:24 am

8O LET ME RIDE YOU!

*clings to your back*

Though you're a bit of a derp dragon so don't kill me.

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:38 am

*growls, blasts fire flame over your head*

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:42 am

*Ducks* D8 can I pwease ride you? 8<

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:48 am

Not in the way you're thinking Wink

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 5:51 am

Ewwwww. >.< I love dragons but in that way that's DISGUSTING

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:01 am

Who said I was a dragon?

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:06 am

You did! XD

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:09 am

Nope, no dragon here.

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:10 am

But I asked if you were one and you sand yes and graaaaaaaaah

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 6:59 am

No I never said that.

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Post  Vantani on Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:11 am

Look up D:

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Post  Kutanra on Wed Jul 11, 2012 7:45 am

You're seeing things

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